The Devil's Dragonis generally getting good to great reviews, thanks to the strength of the story and some truly memorable characters. However, the 1st edition went to print without line breaks/paragraph gaps.
This was an inadvertent error and I understand that some readers find the run-on sentences distracting as a result. Good news! This has been resolved in a 2nd edition which is now available.
This will make reading the book a much better experience for many so you can confidently add another star to whatever reviews you've read for the 2nd edition. This also means that the very limited print run of the 1st edition from just a couple of months ago may now someday be quite valuable, so yes, I can arrange to sign these for you.
I love my Dragon Trilogy fans, thanks for all your feedback so far to make The Devil's Dragon even better.